Selasa, 29 November 2011

Supporting Listening Comprehension and Vocabulary Acquisition with Multimedia Annotations: The Students' Voice

LINDA C. JONES
University of Arkansas

Abstract:
This study extends Mayer's (1997, 2001) generative theory of multimedia learning and investigates under what conditions multimedia annotations can support listening comprehension in a second language. This paper highlights students' views on the effectiveness of multimedia annotations (visual and verbal) in assisting them in their comprehension and acquisition of vocabulary from aural texts. English-speaking college students listened to a 2 min 20 sec historical account in French presented by a computer program. Participants were randomly assigned to one of four listening treatments: the aural text (a) with no annotations, (b) with only verbal annotations, (c) with only visual annotations, and (d) with both visual and verbal annotations. For purposes of this paper, 20 students were purposively selected to participate in interviews. Overall, students remembered word translations and recalled the passage best when they had selected both verbal and visual annotations while listening. Students' voices reflected these results and revealed that they should have options for viewing material in both a visual mode and a verbal mode in a multimedia listening comprehension environment. This study provides qualitative evidence for a generative theory of multimedia learning that suggests that the availability and the choice of visual and verbal annotations in listening comprehension activities enhances students' abilities to comprehend the material presented and to acquire vocabulary. 

KEYWORDS

Multimedia, Listening Comprehension, Choice, Amount of Invested Mental Effort

INTRODUCTION

Listening comprehension activities provide students with the aural component of the target language to help them better hear the intricate sounds, enunciations, and content and develop their abilities to communicate with others in a target language. Educators try to help students enhance their listening skills by assigning them videotape, audiotape or computer-based activities to complete either at home or in the language lab setting. With these materials, students can practice hearing vocabulary words, sentence structures, and dialogues in the target language.

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For years, educators and publishers followed a unimodal approach to listening comprehension and presented aural texts without visual or verbal/textual supportive information. Students were often frustrated by such activities (Jones Vogely, 1998) for any number of reasons including lack of prior knowledge of the topic, the comprehensibility of the speaker, the materials reviewed, the lack of visual information, or even the technological design employed. Certainly, when we utilize technology-based listening comprehension materials, our ultimate goal is to help students develop their language skills. However, if the technological design does not offer helpful comprehension aids (e.g., visual aids), then many students' preferences or needs are ignored, potentially leading to poor comprehension. Thus, when students struggle with the material or the technology used, we find that "the more they fail, the more helpless they feel, and the less effort they come to invest …" (Salomon, 1983, p. 43).

Technology and language teaching have changed in recent years. Now, second language (L2) multimedia packages developed by researchers (e.g., Larson & Bush, 1992; Otto & Pusack, 1992) and by textbook publishing companies provide students with various listening comprehension activities and the learning aids needed to process them. Researchers have also called for an increase in research on L2 listening comprehension (e.g., Cauldwell, 1996; Field, 1997; Joiner, 1997; Lynch, 1998; Mendelsohn, 1998) and an increase in research on technology to better understand how we can utilize the attributes of multimedia to enhance various aspects of language learning, including listening comprehension (e.g., Brett, 1995, 1997; Hoven, 1999; Joiner, 1997; Jones & Plass, 2002; Lynch, 1998; Meskill, 1996; Purdy, 1996; Pusack & Otto, 1997; Salaberry, 2001).

To answer these calls, this paper specifically investigates students' thoughts and opinions concerning how verbal and visual annotations in a multimedia environment can assist them in their acquisition of new vocabulary from and comprehension of an aural L2 passage. Many related studies in the past pursued a purely quantitative approach (Chun & Plass, 1996a, 1996b, 1997a; Mayer & Sims, 1994; Plass, Chun, Mayer, & Leutner, 1998). While highly pertinent, these studies left many questions unanswered concerning students' views and experiences in a multimedia environment. This paper, therefore, more closely examines the students' voices, qualitative data that can provide immeasurable and even unanticipated information concerning the design and effectiveness of multimedia tools for listening comprehension. The results establish a clearer picture of the current needs and attitudes of L2 students in a multimedia environment and clarify how developers can better design listening comprehension materials and activities to enhance students' aural comprehension and make them feel as though they are indeed learning.

To bring the qualitative perspective to light, the research strategies used for both the quantitative and qualitative components will be fully disclosed while the statistical information, more completely discussed in Jones & Plass (2002), will be summarized. Students' voices will be represented by their exact quotes,

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and their remarks will be further highlighted by an appropriate literature review. It is through research such as this that we can promote change in our pedagogical and technological strategies and can find ways to facilitate students' acquisition of L2 aural skills in a multimedia environment.

METHODOLOGY

Quantitative Component

Participants and Design

The participants in this study were 171 English-speaking students enrolled in second semester beginning French at the University of Arkansas. At the time of testing, their mean estimated French GPA was 2.92 (4.0 = A, 3.0 = B, 2.0 = C, 1.0 = D, 0.0 = F).

A pretest/posttest control group (between-subject) design was employed to observe the effects of two factors—the absence or presence of verbal annotations and the absence or presence of visual annotations—on students' comprehension of the aural passage and their acquisition of vocabulary. Participants were randomly assigned to one of four treatments: the aural text (a) without access to annotations, (b) with only verbal annotations available, (c) with only visual annotations available, and (d) with both visual and verbal annotations available.

Dependent Measures and Scoring

The effects of the four aural treatments on students' comprehension and vocabulary acquisition were measured using an immediate multiple-choice vocabulary posttest and an immediate recall protocol posttest (dependent measures) then again, as delayed tests, 3 weeks later. The multiple choice vocabulary posttest was made up of 25 of the 27 keywords visible on the five computer screens of each treatment. The keywords were selected from the aural passage because of their importance in the text and because they could be represented in both a visual and a text-based format. Using the split-half reliability method, the internal consistency of the vocabulary test was .82.

The recall protocol comprehension test instructed students to summarize, in English, the aural passage they listened to. Two French professors chose the 63 propositions that represented the idea units of the passage. The test was scored based on the number of correct propositions given by each student, up to a maximum of 63 points. The interrater reliability of this measure was .97.

Materials

The listening comprehension software was developed using Adobe Premiere 4.2 and Authorware 4.0. The apparatus for presenting the materials consisted of a 22-station Macintosh computer language lab, arranged such that students could view only their own computer screen.

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The computer-based materials presented a 2 min 20 sec aural reading of an authentic encounter between LaSalle and the Quapaw Indians in 1682 (Buzhardt & Hawthorne, 1993; see Appendix). This historic text was chosen because of its rich visual depiction of the encounter and its unavailability in English. It was digitally recorded using the voice of a female native French speaker.

Each treatment began with an introductory screen that placed the historical event in context (advance organizer) and instructed students on how to use the program. The five separate screens that followed contained a total of 27 keywords, positioned on the left side of the screen, accompanied by ellipses to indicate missing words and thus to emulate the flow of the dialogue. Audio play buttons were positioned to the left of each text segment such that students could have equally available access to the predivided syntactic chunks of the passage (Meskill, 1996; O'Malley, Chamot, & Küpper, 1989). An icon of a speaker was present on each screen so that students could drag a keyword to it to hear the word pronounced.

The four treatments differed as follows:

1. In the Control group (Trt. 1), no annotations for the key vocabulary words were available except for the option of hearing them pronounced.

2. In the Visual group (visual annotations only, Trt. 2), a camera icon was present to the left of the pronunciation icon. Students could drag a keyword to the camera icon to view its image.

3. In the Verbal group (verbal annotations only, Trt. 3), a text icon was present to the right of the pronunciation icon. Students could drag a keyword to the text icon to view its text-based translation.

4. The Visual and Verbal group (visual and verbal annotations, Trt. 4) contained both the camera and the text icons, in addition to the pronunciation icon. Students could drag a keyword to the camera icon to view its visual annotation or to the text icon to view its verbal annotation of the keyword (see Figure 1).

The visual annotations consisted of 14 color drawings and 13 color photos. The text annotations were written in bold, 14 point Helvetica font. Students could select any annotation available in their treatment as often as desired, before, during, or after presentation of each aural segment.

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Figure 1

Visual and Group Treatment

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Procedures

Students first participated in this segment of the study during two consecutive 50-minute class periods (25 minutes in the first class period, 50 minutes in the second). On the first day, students filled out a paper-and-pencil demographic questionnaire and were then given 8 minutes to complete a vocabulary pretest. On the second day, students were randomly assigned to one of the four treatment groups. They were given 14 minutes to listen to the passage and were instructed to look up all annotations available in their treatment. They were then given 8 minutes to summarize all that they could from the passage and then 8 minutes to complete a vocabulary posttest, identical to the pretreatment vocabulary test. Three weeks later, students completed unannounced delayed vocabulary and comprehension tests that were administered in the same way as the immediate measures.

Qualitative Methods

Participants

Twenty students were purposively selected to participate in interviews so as to gain a clearer understanding of the effects of the different media types on students' comprehension and vocabulary acquisition (see Table 1). Students were selected based on the treatment group in which they worked and the extreme

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results in their comprehension and vocabulary acquisition tests. All interviewees were asked to report on the strategies they used and the effects of these strategies on their comprehension and vocabulary acquisition.

Table 1

Number of Students Interviewed Per Treatment

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Interviews

The interviews lasted from 20 to 45 minutes each and took place after all dependent measures were completed. During each interview, the researcher used prepared questions but did not strictly adhere to them since, more times than not, the interviewees provided responses to the questions or discussed unanticipated topics without prompting. Once all interviews were completed, they were transcribed and coded for closer analysis.

Throughout each interview, the researcher remained unbiased and accepted each student's remarks openly. Member checks ensured that what the students said indeed reflected their true beliefs. Unfortunately, all interviews took place 4 to 5 weeks after students' experiences with the treatments, an unavoidable situation of "give and take" so as to eliminate any influence of the interviews on the delayed comprehension and acquisition tests. Therefore, the "lateness" of the interviews potentially lessened students' expression of their experiences with their respective treatments.

Data Analysis

All interviews were closely analyzed to identify any emergent data patterns. Since the data were processed electronically, the researcher looked for consistent global themes; in particular, information that underscored students' experiences with the material and their attitudes toward the different annotations available. Once prepared, the transcripts were more closely reviewed numerous times to identify further unanticipated patterns and individual remarks relating to the quantitative results. The identified information was numerically coded and organized based on themes which were more deeply analyzed to reveal any subtleties that could further support the statistical outcomes. Primary themes were retained for discussion based on their relevancy, either in a supportive or a contradictory manner. Qualitative analysis thus provided a more triangulated approach, and exact quotes are presented in the results and discussion section below.

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RESULTS AND DISCUSSION

The underlying theme of this study focused on aural information processing in French as influenced by access to verbal (word translations) and/or visual (images) presentation modes. It was believed that students would comprehend an aural passage and acquire vocabulary best when they had access to and actively selected visual and verbal annotations accompanying the aural material, while students who had access to only one mode (visual or verbal) would perform at a moderate level, and those without access to any annotated information would perform the poorest. Similar research on the comprehension of written texts in a multimedia environment suggests that when students access multiple annotation types (visual and verbal) that accompany a reading comprehension passage, learning is more likely (Chun & Plass, 1996a, 1996b, 1997a; Plass et al., 1998). However, these studies were conducted without inclusion of students' opinions toward the material with which they worked. The focal point of the study presented here is: What can students tell us to better clarify how visual and verbal annotations might help them to comprehend information aurally presented in a multimedia environment? To understand students' views more fully, each hypothesis will be presented followed by a summary of the quantitative results obtained. The remainder of the discussion will then focus on students' views of the helpfulness of visual and verbal annotations for supporting listening comprehension in a multimedia environment.

Hypothesis 1

The first hypothesis argues that students who complete a listening comprehension activity that contains a choice of visual and verbal annotations will recall more propositions of a listening text than those who complete listening tasks with single annotations (visual or verbal) or no annotations. The quantitative results of the study support this hypothesis.

To summarize, a multivariate analysis of variance (MANOVA), computed with the number of correct answers on the immediate recall protocol posttest as the dependent measure and the presence or absence of visual and verbal annotations as the between-subjects factors, revealed a main effect for visual annotations, F(1,167) = 70.02, MSE = 1137.20, p < .001, η2 = .274, and a main effect for verbal annotations, F(1,167) = 16.60, MSE = 269.52, p < .001, η2 = .065. Post hoc comparisons (Tukey HSD) revealed statistically significant differences, showing that students' performance was lowest when no annotations were available (Trt. 1, M = 3.2, SD = 2.9), but was highest when visual information (Trt. 2, M = 9.2, SD = 4.0) and when visual and verbal information were available (Trt. 4, M = 10.9, SD = 4.6). Students with visual and verbal annotations performed significantly better than those who received verbal annotations alone (Trt. 3, M = 6.52, SD = 4.3; p < .05) and better than those who received no annotations (Trt. 1, p < .01). The difference in performance of students in the Visual and Verbal group and students in the Visual group approached significance (p = .052).

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Multivariate analysis of variance with the number of correct answers on the delayed recall protocol posttest as the dependent measure and the presence or absence of visual or verbal annotations as the between subjects factors revealed a main effect for visual annotations F(1,133) = 24.61, MSE = 243.184, p < 0.001, η2 =0.160, but not for verbal annotations. Post hoc comparisons (Tukey HSD) revealed statistically significant differences showing that students' performance was lowest when no annotations were available (Trt. 1, M = 2.66, SD = 2.77) and when verbal annotations were available (Trt. 3, M = 3.29, SD = 3.23); the difference between these two groups was not significant. Students' performance was highest when visual annotations were available (Trt. 2, M = 5.58, SD = 3.48) and when visual and verbal annotations were available (Trt. 4, M = 5.78, SD = 2.89); the difference between these two groups was not significant. However, a main effect for the availability of visual annotations demonstrates that differences in comprehension were statistically significant (p < .001) for those who received visual annotations (Visual group and Visual and Verbal group) and those who did not (Control group and Verbal group). Students' remarks supported these results and thus the effectiveness of multiple annotations and even visual annotations alone for comprehending the aural passage. Relevant themes emerged including the benefits of selection from and interaction with different processing modes and the strength of visual annotations for attaining a deeper level of understanding of the aural material.

Since prior knowledge of the vocabulary was very low (M = 3.08, SD = 3.40), understanding the text was quite difficult for those without access to any annotations. Allyn,1 Jan, Daniel and Nina (Control group, Trt. 1) were particularly cognizant of the absence of helpful annotations and the difficult nature of the material. Allyn (Trt. 1), for example, referred to the treatment as "cruel and unusual" while Jan (Trt. 1) exclaimed that accessing keywords for pronunciation alone did not help his comprehension:

I had a tough time with that and it got kinda repetitive and it was pretty long and I guess like I was expecting some more visual cues … basically, we could just drag and hear the word again which didn't help a whole lot.

The absence of annotated clues and low prior knowledge of the vocabulary prevented him from effectively processing the aural input. Despite the efforts of Allyn (Trt. 1) to continue "listening to it [the passage] to try to figure out how they were using that [a word]," low prior knowledge of the vocabulary and an absence of annotated information prevented even repetitive listening from clarifying the aural passage: "If I knew the words then being able to repeat it would help a lot more" (Daniel, Trt. 1). The students simply could not construct meaning without annotations, leading Nina to lose focus of the task all together: "It was really irritating … am I supposed to be doing something that I don't realize? I don't know … with no extraneous information … I twiddled my thumbs a little" (Nina, Trt. 1). Nina's frustration demonstrates that the more students fail to comprehend, the more helpless they feel and the less effort they come to

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invest in a given passage (Salomon, 1983). The students' poor results on the immediate recall protocol posttest (M = 3.21) and their delayed recall protocol posttest (M = 2.66) reflect the difficult nature of the control group (Trt. 1) and led one student to exclaim: "It made me feel like I don't know any French" (Allyn, Trt. 1). Overall, their comprehension of the passage was significantly lower (p < 0.001) than those who had access to visual annotations.

The Control group (Trt. 1) and the Verbal group (Trt. 3) were significantly different from each other on the immediate recall protocol posttest (Tukey HSD = 0.001) but not on the delayed recall protocol posttest (Tukey HSD = 0.821). Despite their statistical similarities, students in the Verbal group (Trt. 3) believed that the translations of the keywords helped them understand the aural passage:

I found it to be a big help. The key words going through gave what the meanings of the words were and that would help me when I went back and listened … it really helped me understand and I could pick up on the words I hadn't necessarily picked up on before because I knew where the conversation was headed and what it was about … if I wouldn't have had the meaning of the word there … it would've been like making a stab in the dark (Max, Trt. 3).

Keyword translations provided information directly related to the passage and allowed students to more richly utilize metacognitive, cognitive and interactive strategies. Doug (Trt. 3), for example, would select from the keyword translations to construct meaning from the text:

I paid attention to the keywords because that was there and that's what I knew and that's what I didn't know but then once I learned the keywords then I'd try to go back and put it in the sentence and see if I could recognize the whole sentence as well.

Deb (Trt. 3) also followed a particular strategy to process the aural text:

I listened through it trying to figure out as many words as I could. I think I dragged each word before I listened to it. And then, I would listen to it … I tried to maybe put the words that I knew in context. So, and then … I'd go back through and listen through it you know parts of it just to get more meaning.

Because students differ, the freedom of interaction meant that students could follow their preferred processing paths through the aural treatment. Despite this flexibility, the presence of so many new, unfamiliar words hindered Jerry's (Trt. 3) ability to understand:

I'm not to the point yet where I can pick out what they are saying unless it was words that we've been working on in class recently or have worked on … like I could've listened to that thing on the computer a hundred times and I wouldn't have ever known what they were saying.

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Other than Jerry's struggles, the Verbal group (Trt. 3) expressed a more positive view of the activity and believed that keyword translations were sufficient for comprehending the passage. However, the immediate recall protocol (M = 6.52) and delayed recall protocol posttest results (M = 3.29) did not reflect this more positive outlook.

All recall protocol posttest results for the Visual group (Trt. 2) and the Visual and Verbal group (Trt. 4) differed significantly from those of the Verbal group (Trt. 3, p < 0.050) and the Control group (Trt. 1, p < 0.001). However, the Visual group (Trt. 2) did not differ significantly on the immediate recall protocol (Tukey HSD = 0.203) or on the delayed recall protocol posttest (Tukey HSD = 0.992) from those who processed both visual and verbal annotations (Trt. 4). Despite their similarities, access to words annotated in both visual and verbal modes lead to the highest recall protocol mean scores. In other words, the "'good' mixture of narration and visuals [resulted] in a richer and more durable memory representation" (Baggett, 1989, p. 120). These results support and extend Mayer's (1997, 2001) generative theory of multimedia learning since the acquisition of new knowledge and comprehension of the aural material was greatest when students processed the text, selected from the relevant verbal and visual information available, organized the verbal and visual mental representations of the annotations into a coherent mental representation, and then integrated this representation into their existing mental model to help them most successively construct meaning from the aural passage. Since a connection exists between "an element in the text and some other element that is crucial to the interpretation of it" (Baggett, 1989, p. 108), students had multiple avenues from which they could recall information from memory.

To understand more clearly why the Visual group (Trt. 2) and the Visual and Verbal group (Trt. 4) differed significantly from the others, we must first explore the effects of selecting from both visual and verbal annotations on students' aural comprehension. In the Visual and Verbal group (Trt. 4), students could choose between the different annotation types; they developed two different mental representations (visual and verbal) in addition to a mental representation of the aural input and, thus, integrated the organized representations of the different modes into their mental model of the aural passage. As Lowell (Trt. 4) commented,

It helped to have the pictures there and to have an explanation … just seeing the two together and it was just, like when I would go back and you asked me words later on and I would just be able to think, oh I would go back in the story and just like remember pictures of the canoe or the words or something like that.

Chris (Trt. 4), in fact, followed a particular strategy to process the aural input and thus construct meaning:

Whenever I went through it first, I just did translation. And then, I went back and did the word with the picture and then I think I went through it a

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third time and did all three together. I'd look at the word, listen to the translation, and then I'd look at the picture again.

Overall, students in the Visual and Verbal group (Trt. 4) received the highest mean scores on the immediate recall protocol posttest (M = 10.89) and the delayed recall protocol posttest (M = 5.78)

"Choice," an important component of Mayer's (1997, 2001) generative theory of multimedia learning, argues that students may freely select from the information available to process the text. Since students learn efficiently in different ways (Reinert, 1976), multimedia environments that provide both visual and verbal annotations of keywords may be most effective since students can choose the annotation type that best suits their needs (Plass et al., 1998) and can review this information more than once, thereby further reinforcing their learning (Chun & Plass, 1996a). To demonstrate the power of multimodal information, Garza (1991) found that including L2 text-based subtitles with an L2 video enhanced students' comprehension. The redundancy of the material in aural, verbal, and visual modes meant that students could focus on and select from those modes that best facilitated their aural comprehension. Chun and Plass (1996b) also looked at the effects of annotations with different forms of media on reading comprehension of an L2 reading passage and concluded that visual information in addition to verbal information helped support micro- and macrolevel processing. The presence of visuals and text lead to the building of referential connections between the two systems, resulting in more retrieval routes to the vocabulary items and additive effects on recall (Chun & Plass, 1996a).

The choice of different annotation modes implies that students actively interacted with the technology, as though engaged in a conversation: "I felt like I had a French speaker at my disposal only I didn't have to ask them to repeat, I would just click on it and listen as many times as I wanted" (Bob, Trt. 4). Though Doug (Trt. 3) worked only with word translations, he, too, found the computer to be more "social" than the audio tape:

On those [tape exercises], you hear a word you don't know then that's it, you don't know it … you've just got to figure it out and try to look it up if you even know how it's pronounced but with the computer you are able to have a conversation with the computer. You can take the keywords up there and get the definition … extremely helpful.

Meskill (1996) argues that an increase in interaction with the different modes of input available will lead to greater integration of the aural message into a learner's developmental system and thus greater recall of the material. Faerch and Kaspar (1986) also argue that comprehension is best ensured through interaction and negotiation. Since the Visual group (Trt. 2) and the Verbal group (Trt. 3) had access to single annotations, some interaction was possible. However, the multiple annotation modes available in the Visual and Verbal group (Trt. 4) provided easier access to redundant information from the aural passage,

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encouraged more interaction, and further reinforced their learning (Chun & Plass, 1996a).

The strength of images affected students' comprehension of the aural passage as well: "It helped a lot because a couple of times it was hard to understand but seeing the pictures mainly was the big thing that helped" (Edie, Trt. 2). Rebecca's (Trt. 2) remarks were particularly striking:

I don't necessarily think giving the definition out right immediately and seeing that with the word; it's like you have to figure it out, you have to go through a process, you have to kind of want it, you know you see the word [picture] and you want to know what it means and so by just that I think I feel like it kind of clicks something in your head and you remember you tend to remember it a little bit more than rather if it is the word definition … it makes you question it or even if you're really not that interested in it but if you want to succeed at what you are doing and you are trying at what you are doing … I really like the pictures a lot … it allows you to visualize it better.

Rebecca's description reinforces the theory that visual annotations demand but also support deeper processing of a proposition than do verbal annotations; since visuals carry a structural message that compliments the language presented (Baggett, 1989; Kozma, 1991), they carry more properties with the corresponding events of the real world than do text (Kozma, 1991) and, thus, make learning more efficient (Oxford & Crookall, 1990). Therefore, if listening entails the construction of mental representations and interpretations, it makes sense that visuals would more strongly support such a process than words (Meskill, 1996) since "the mapping of pictures onto the mental model provides a stronger bond than the mapping of words due to the different representations of their information (analog vs. symbolic)" (Kost, Foss & Lenzini, 1999, p. 99). Analogic representations (images) are mapped directly onto the mental model and are assumed to be language independent, whereas symbolic representations (text) are sequentially processed and demand "an indirect transformation between the symbolic representation of the text and the analog mental model" (Chun & Plass, 1997, p. 8).

Research has long indicated that processing images with an aural text positively affects students' aural comprehension (Carlson, 1990; Chung, 1994; Mueller, 1980; Pouwels, 1992; Severin, 1967). Severin (1967) determined that students who processed a listening passage with pictures performed better on posttreatment activities than did those who received sound only or sound and unrelated pictures. Mueller (1980) factored student proficiency levels into his study of listening comprehension in a multimodal environment and determined that less proficient students performed best when an image was present but that more proficient students' performance showed very little difference between listening with or without images. He suggests that a single-mode approach is sufficient for high prior knowledge students but that dually coded information

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could help low prior knowledge learners fill in the gaps that are otherwise absent. Kozma (1991, p. 192), therefore, argues that

People can construct a mental representation of the semantic meaning of a story from either audio or visual information alone, but it appears that when presented together each source provides additional, complementary information that retains some of the characteristics of the symbol system of origin . . . Audio may be sufficient for those knowledgeable of a domain, but visual symbol systems supply important situational information for those less knowledgeable.

Research in listening comprehension (e.g., Chung, 1994; Hudson, 1982; Mueller, 1980; Omaggio-Hadley, 2000; Severin, 1967), in tandem with the quantitative and qualitative results in this study, highlight the helpfulness of images for aural processing and help demonstrate why comprehension rates in the Visual group and the Visual and Verbal group were significantly greater than those in the Verbal group and the Control group, p < 0.05. The "bushier" format was key. To clarify, Baggett (1989) argues that when we hear the verbal representation "brown leaf," we have two "words" before us: "brown" and "leaf." When we see a "brown leaf," we are more cognizant of its size, shape, color, use, and environment. This visual information simply carries more information than does text and allows for greater comprehension and retention. When we examine the recall protocol measures, students who accessed visual annotations understood and retained their knowledge of the passage best because the dense/deep quality of images allowed residual memory to remain. The visual annotations improved students' memory of the aural input, both short term and long term.

Students' comments supported the quantitative results for the first hypothesis in that the Control group (Trt. 1) had the lowest opinion of the activity as well as the lowest scores on all recall protocol posttests; the absence of annotations prevented them from understanding the passage. The Verbal group (Trt. 3) was more positive and believed that the translations of the keywords helped them construct meaning. However, these students did not perform as well as those who had visual annotations available to them. The Visual group (Trt. 2) believed that visual annotations allowed for deeper processing of the aural passage and, thus, longer retention of the material. Images did, in fact, lead to deeper processing; the mapping of visual input with the aural input into a mental model resulted in stronger recall than did the mapping of words. The Visual and Verbal group (Trt. 4) further believed that the ability to interact with the computer and to choose from multiple annotations provided more than one route to the information and created a more individualized, "socially" interactive approach. Students could select from and make two and even three connections between the verbal, visual, and aural mental representations to help them construct meaning. Students thus provided a more supportive view of the helpfulness of multiple modes, images, and interaction for aural comprehension.

Students' construction of knowledge from an aural text requires "learning on

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a higher level, including understanding words in context as well as propositions" (Plass et al., 1998, p. 27). Thus, the deeper processing required of and supported by images leads to greater knowledge construction. Initially, this process seems different from vocabulary acquisition where students often rely on rote memorization of word translations to learn the meanings of words. Despite the shallower reputation of vocabulary acquisition, the availability of different annotation types (visual and verbal) and the amount of invested mental effort (Salomon, 1983) that students give to a particular annotation mode suggest that deeper processing may also be key to acquiring vocabulary. Therefore, it is a discussion of the second hypothesis and vocabulary acquisition in an annotated listening comprehension environment to which we now turn.

Hypothesis 2

The second hypothesis examines how students best acquire vocabulary when the availability of annotation types varies from treatment to treatment. It was proposed that students who completed a listening comprehension activity that contained visual and verbal annotations would acquire more vocabulary words than those who completed the listening task with single annotations (visual or verbal) or no annotations. To summarize the statistical results, a mulivariate analysis of variance, computed with the number of correct answers on the immediate vocabulary posttest as the dependent measure and the presence or absence of visual and verbal annotations as the between-subjects factors, revealed a main effect for verbal annotations, F(1,167) = 82.38, MSE = 1561.27, p < .001, η2 = .243; and for visual annotations, F(1,167) = 70.90, MSE = 1343.56, p < .001, η2 = .209; and an interaction effect for visual and verbal annotations, F(1,167) = 18.71, MSE = 354.61, p < .001, η2 = .055. Post hoc comparisons (Tukey HSD) additionally showed that student performance was lowest when no annotations were available (Trt. 1, N = 42, M = 8.10, SD = 4.3), and highest when both visual and verbal annotations were available (Trt. 4, N = 44, M = 19.75, SD = 3.2). In fact, students in the Visual and Verbal group significantly outperformed all others (for Control group, Trt. 1, p < .001; for Verbal group, Trt. 3, p < .05; for Visual group, Trt. 2, p < .05). When either visual or verbal annotations alone were available (Verbal group, Trt. 3: N = 44, M = 17.02, SD = 5.6; Visual group, Trt. 2: N = 41, M = 16.59, SD = 4.0), students' performance was higher than when no annotations were available (for Verbal group and for Visual group, p < .001), but did not differ significantly from one another.

In addition to these results, a multivariate analysis of variance with the number of correct answers on the delayed vocabulary posttest as the dependent measure and the presence or absence of visual or verbal annotations as the between subjects factors revealed a main effect for visual annotations F(1,133) = 41.22, MSE = 760.38, p < .001, η2 = .20, for verbal annotations F(1,133) = 21.11, MSE = 379.28, p < .001, η2 = .105 and an interaction effect for verbal and visual annotations, F(1,133) = 4.76, MSE = 85.58, p < .05, h2 = .024. Post hoc

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comparisons (Tukey HSD) further revealed that when no annotations were present, students' performance again was lowest (Trt. 1, M = 6.33, SD = 3.69). When visual annotations (Trt. 2, M = 12.45, SD = 4.20) or verbal annotations (Trt. 3, M = 11.15, SD = 4.90) were available, students' performance was significantly higher than when no annotations were available (for Verbal group and for Visual group, p < .001), but did not differ significantly from one another. When both visual and verbal annotations were present, students' performance was highest (Trt. 4, M = 14.08, SD = 4.02), and the difference to students with verbal annotations available was statistically significant (p < .05), while the difference to those with visual annotations available was not.

As with Hypothesis 1, students' remarks supported this second hypothesis and the helpfulness of multiple annotations for acquiring vocabulary. Once again, relevant themes emerged including the helpfulness of interaction with the annotations, the supportive nature of multimodal materials for vocabulary acquisition, as well as students' beliefs concerning the amount of invested mental effort (Salomon, 1983) needed to process verbal or visual annotations.

In the strictest terms, vocabulary acquisition involves rote learning whereby students learn or memorize definitions of individual words. This basic idea would lead one to assume that direct translations of L2 keywords would provide students with the tools necessary to understand. However, it may be misleading. Kellogg and Howe (1971) suggest that foreign words associated with visual imagery or actual objects are learned more easily than those without such comprehension aids. Plass et al. (1998) contend that retrieving words is more difficult than inputting them and that multiple annotation types, rather than single mode annotations, can facilitate this process since "the organization and integration of two different forms of mental representations enhance retrieval performance by providing multiple retrieval cues" (p. 34).

Students' impressions varied as to the helpfulness of images and translations for acquiring vocabulary. The Control group (Trt. 1) received the lowest mean scores on all vocabulary measures and again found the absence of annotated information very challenging: "I thought the French vocabulary and listening parts in the study were difficult" (Jan, Trt. 1). On the other hand, access to annotated cues in the other three treatments helped students process the material: "Instead of having to flip through 1,000 pages in a French book to try to figure out what this word means, you just had to drag it up … it really was helpful" (Doug, Trt. 3). Frances (Trt. 4) had a similar view:

You were doing something and you had pictures to relate to what you were doing and … you didn't have to look in separate, you didn't have to go 'let me flip back to this'; it made it a whole lot more convenient and less frustrating.

Garrett (1991) favors the use of annotations that address individual preferences since they allow students to access the explanations and practice opportunities they need. In this light, students expectedly had differing views towards

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the helpfulness of visual or verbal annotations for acquiring vocabulary. For Frances (Trt. 4), images combined with the aural passage helped her later recall word meanings:

Well, a lot of the words sounded similar so, for words that were like totally off, I related like the picture. Like there was one word that described beautiful and it seemed like design, so I related words like that. I forgot what the word was but it sounded similar to design and I kind of related design to meaning beautiful, that's what the word meant, like decorated or something like that … The pictures helped me to get a feel for the passage. Also, I will probably be able to remember the vocabulary from picture association.

She selected from the annotations available, made connections between the mental representations of the sounds, words, and images and later used these connections to recall the vocabulary. Chris (Trt. 4) also relied on the strong relationship between the visual and verbal mental representations to recall their meaning more easily:

It helped a lot for me personally to be able to … have the translation, but to also see the picture whenever I heard the word just to associate … maybe if I couldn't remember the hearing text I could remember seeing it on the page and I think it helps to have the picture along with hearing it, just you know like a double reinforcement.

However, students differed concerning the match of annotation types with their preferred processing strategies. Visual annotations, for example, suited Pat's (Trt. 2) strategy of acquiring new vocabulary: "When I'm learning a foreign language, I try to think of the pictures instead of thinking of the English word and translating; I try to think of pictorially or emotionally what it is and match that to the word." In contrast, despite his preference for text-based cues, Bob (Trt. 4) looked up some images that subsequently helped him retain and recall two vocabulary words:

There are two that I did recall with visual cues; I remember noting that when I did it because I was surprised that the images stuck with me … one was the culs, the backs of the people, and the other one was the poles, the poles sticking out of the ground, the perches.

Annotations do help students acquire vocabulary (Chun & Plass, 1996a; Knight, 1994; Kost et al., 1999; Plass et al., 1998). Chun and Plass (1996a) looked at the effectiveness of different annotation modes (visual and verbal) for vocabulary acquisition in an L2 reading passage. They found that access to multiple annotations led to even greater vocabulary acquisition; on average, students recalled 77% of the vocabulary words when they accessed multiple annotations. We see similar results in the present study; on average, students recognized 79% of the vocabulary from the aural passage when multiple

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annotations were present, and they provided favorable comments for using such a strategy.

Despite the helpfulness of different annotation types, students had strong opinions concerning the amount of invested mental effort (Salomon, 1983) needed to process them and thus to learn the vocabulary or to recall the aural passage. Pat (Trt. 2), for example, believed that some images may not have clearly defined the keywords and that translations would have been easier:

Sometimes the English translation would have been nice because see there was a picture and I wasn't sure what exactly what part of the picture was important … Like the word fog, there was a picture of cliffs and the arrows kinda pointed to the fog but it was awfully hard to point to fog. And I think it took me a couple of times of listening to it before I realized that it was the fog and not say the bluffs that it was pointing to or talking about. So, in some instances, the English translation would be easier than a picture would.

Although she did not have the translation "fog" to influence her understanding of the French word brume, through deeper analysis of the image itself, she correctly identified the word. Others remarked that a direct translation was sufficient, "I think that just the textual definition is plenty and anything else is not really very meaningful" (Pam, Trt. 3). Still others commented that it was only out of curiosity that they consulted the images:

I only looked at the visuals because I was curious as to what the computer would do but when I wanted to understand the word, I was much more inclined to go for the translation because that was the most immediately gratifying thing … (Bob, Trt. 4).

For Charlie (Trt. 2), a translation provided instant meaning of a keyword, whereas an image demanded greater effort: "The images, the point of them is still to get across what the word means and a translation is going to do that fine without you having to interpret what the image is trying to tell you." John (Trt. 4) added that a translation eliminated the need to "figure out" the visual representation: "Seeing the English really helped me out so I didn't have to figure out anything so it was there, set in stone, this is the way it is, memorize it so you can use it, type thing." And yet, it may well be the challenge of figuring out meanings of images that lead to greater retention of the vocabulary and greater recall of the passage.

Students' views of the easy or difficult nature of visual and verbal annotations highlight Salomon's (1983) theory concerning the amount of invested mental effort students apply to a given task. Specifically, Salomon (1983, p. 42) believes that "the number of nonautomatic elaborations applied to a unit of material …," or the amount of mental effort students invest in learning is influenced by how they perceive the source of the information. That is, if they perceive that a given task is difficult, they will use more mental effort and therefore more nonautomatic energy to process the material. If they perceive that a

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given task is easy, they will invest less mental effort and may potentially learn or retain less as a result.

Cennamo (1993) determined that learners' perception of television as an easy medium actually interfered with their ability to learn from it. Salomon (1984) also found that when learners perceived television to be easier than print, they invested less mental effort in learning from television and therefore learned less. In this study, many students believed that translations were easier to process than images because they demanded less effort to clarify meaning. However, those who accessed visual annotations outperformed those who did not. Only on the posttreatment vocabulary test was no significant difference present between those who accessed visual annotations and those who did not. Nevertheless, the mean difference from pre- to posttreatment vocabulary tests was greater when students accessed visual annotations than when they accessed verbal annotations: Verbal and Visual group (Trt. 4), mean difference = 16.075; Visual group (Trt. 2), mean difference = 14.34; Verbal group (Trt. 3), mean difference = 13.18; Control group (Trt. 1), mean difference = 5.36. In addition, the Visual group (Trt. 2, M = 12.45) and the Visual and Verbal group (Trt. 4, M = 14.08) did not differ significantly from each other in the delayed vocabulary test (Tukey HSD = 0.324), though the Visual and Verbal group remained significantly different from the Verbal group (Tukey HSD = 0.012). Students who accessed verbal annotations alone may have expended fewer cognitive resources; they worked in an automatic manner, in which little conscious effort was utilized and experience with the material was fast and effortless, and therefore learned less. In contrast, students who worked with images worked in a nonautomatic manner in which deeper, more effortful mental processing occurred (Salomon, 1983). These students received significantly higher recall protocol scores and better acquired vocabulary. In short, "the rate of forgetting [was] thus a function of the lack of depth and analysis" (Cohen, 1987, p. 45).

Salomon's (1983) theory helps to explain why the results were significantly greater when students accessed visual annotations. However, it does not completely address the outcomes of this study. An interaction effect was present for both verbal and visual annotations and students' results on the vocabulary tests, when accessing verbal or visual annotations alone, were not significantly different from each other. There are two possible explanations for this situation. First, students who accessed translations on the computer viewed the same, direct representations of the keywords on each vocabulary test. Their treatment, by default, familiarized them with the English translations and, consequently, gave them an advantage over those who did not have translations (i.e., those who had to "work harder" to interpret meaning). Students without access to verbal annotations did not see direct English translations until they took the vocabulary tests. Despite the presumably "easier" nature of translations, students more successfully acquired and retained vocabulary definitions with images present.

An additional explanation for the similarities between those who accessed

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only verbal or only visual annotations is that the multiple-choice vocabulary tests may have influenced the effects of students' invested mental effort (Cennamo, 1993). Though five English distracters along with the correct response were provided to diminish students' abilities to guess, the potential to guess correct responses remained. In contrast, the recall protocol tests required students to demonstrate their understanding of the material without helpful clues available. Therefore, as Cennamo (1993, p. 41) suggests,

When researchers are interested in assessing the effects of the mental effort learners use to elaborate on the content and create meaning from the materials, questions that require constructed responses may be a more sensitive measure than recognition tasks.

The challenge of creating "proof" of understanding may have additionally contributed to the significant differences between the presence or absence of visuals in all recall protocol measures. The potential to guess the correct response on the vocabulary tests, and the advantage of previewing the verbatim translations as a part of the Verbal group (Trt. 3) may have diminished the significant differences, thereby reducing the visibility of students' invested mental effort in the results of the vocabulary tests. The strength of images cannot be denied, in particular since students in the Visual group (Trt. 2) did not have access to direct translations and yet performed better than those who did.

SUMMARY

Throughout this study, students performed best when they had access to visual and verbal annotations, moderately well when they had access to visual or verbal annotations alone, and poorest when no annotations were available to them. In most instances, access to multiple annotations led to significantly higher results than the other annotations. Students' comments supported these results in that those who worked without annotations had the lowest opinion of the activity as well as the lowest scores on all dependent measures; the absence of annotations prevented them from understanding the passage and learning the vocabulary. The Verbal group (Trt. 3) was more positive and believed that the word translations helped them understand and recall the vocabulary. The Visual group (Trt. 2) and the Visual and Verbal group (Trt. 4) believed that visual annotations allowed for deeper processing of the aural passage and thus longer retention of the material and greater vocabulary knowledge. Images, in fact, did lead to deeper processing of the aural text; the mapping of visual input with the aural input into a mental model resulted in stronger recall than the mapping of words. As a result, these two groups rarely differed significantly from each other though access to both annotations consistently led to the highest results on all dependent measures.

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interactive approach to the activity. The choice of annotations led to more than one retrieval route to the information, a strategy that was particularly helpful when either the image or the translation was not clear or when students' cognitive abilities were low for a particular annotation type. The presence of visual and text annotations allowed students to select from the material and to build referential connections between two, if not three, systems, thereby resulting in more retrieval routes to the vocabulary items and added effects on recall.

The qualitative data also highlighted students' views of the amount of mental effort needed to process visual or verbal annotations. Overall, those who worked with any annotation type were positive about their treatment. However, some believed that English translations were more effective and efficient for learning vocabulary than images because images required more effort to process word meanings. Students' remarks appear to corroborate Salomon's (1983) theory that the less mental effort placed on a given task, the less successful the outcome. Students who believed that verbal annotations were easier to process may have expended less effort with such annotation types and, therefore, retained less vocabulary on the delayed vocabulary test and only slightly understood the passage. Images, on the other hand, were viewed as the more difficult form of annotation with which to work. Students may have used more mental effort to process these annotations, and therefore performed significantly better on all recall protocol measures than those with verbal annotations alone. This same attitude may have helped them to perform better on the delayed posttreatment vocabulary test than those with verbal annotations alone. Students in the Visual and Verbal group (Trt. 4) also reconfirmed that choosing from multiple annotation types created a more individualized and balanced approach to the activity, a strategy that was particularly helpful when either the image or the translation was not clear. This outcome, once again, reconfirms Mayer's (1997, 2001) generative theory of multimedia learning and demonstrates that the treatment design itself benefited students' comprehension and vocabulary acquisition more so than did the amount of invested mental effort. The presence of visual and text annotations allowed students to select from the material and build referential connections between multiple systems, thereby resulting in more retrieval routes to the vocabulary items and greater comprehension of the aural passage.

CONCLUSION

In a pilot study conducted during the Fall of 1998, students remarked that they struggled with listening comprehension activities when there was a lack of choice for information. In particular, students struggled with aural exercises when they had no preference for the pedagogical design nor could receive any relevant contextual assistance to help them better comprehend the passage. The absence of choice compromised their ability to understand the spoken message.

Guillory (1998, p. 104) believes that strategies that promote access to annotations could well motivate students to work more with aural activities:

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Technology-based language learning environments which present short and interesting authentic video modules and a lexicon containing the keywords in the captions for use as a resource while listening may well motivate learners to spend time outside of the classroom exploring the language … .

In this study, several students confirmed this view:

I liked what we did on the computer better than any listening comprehension I've done before. I found it much more helpful … I'd like to see it if maybe they made it a part of the classroom or say once every two weeks the class went to the listening lab and say did that (Pat, Trt. 2).

Doug (Trt. 3), who was not impressed with the typical tape technology used in language teaching, made a similar remark: "I think we need more of them [listening activities]. In my opinion, we need to get rid of all that [the tape booths] out there and get all those computers in there and do that [the computer based activities]." Chris (Trt. 4) furthered this belief by saying

I really liked using the computer, it really helps to be able to hear and see the text and pictures and words. I will definitely try to come to the lab to study if there are programs like this one.

These remarks reflect the educational implication of this study, that we should provide students with the option to select from and process visual and verbal annotations that accompany an aural passage in a multimedia environment. Students' remarks revealed that choice in educational materials can better ensure that students' cognitive abilities and learning preferences are considered. Such a strategy would address students' needs and would permit them to use their own self-directed style of accessing and processing information. Because the students had a more positive outlook and better results with listening activities when provided with multiple annotations and interaction, giving them a more prominent opportunity to succeed certainly seems in order.

A theoretical implication for combining listening comprehension activities with multimedia is that organizing aural material into working memory seems to be aided by students making connections between the visual and verbal systems. As stated by the students themselves, the presence of visual and verbal annotations helped them to link information with the aural message and thus better retain information in long-term memory for later comprehension and vocabulary recall. Students' voices, in addition to the quantitative results summarized above, extend Mayer's (1997, 2001) generative theory of multimedia learning to listening comprehension since selection from the material available and construction of referential connections between visual, verbal, and aural representations gave students more retrieval routes to the information to recall vocabulary words and to comprehend the passage.

Senin, 28 November 2011

Face-to-face and Computer-mediated Peer Review in EFL Writing

Mei-ching Ho

The Arizona State University

Sandra J. Savignon
The Pennsylvania State University

Abstract:
       This paper examines the use of face-to-face peer review (FFPR) and computer-mediated peer review (CMPR) in an Asian English-as-a-foreign-language (EFL) academic writing context. The participants were 33 English majors from a university of science and technology in Taiwan, a new type of school offering 2-year associate degree programs in foreign language studies. Our study contributes to the research on foreign-language-writing collaboration for Chinese learners in two important ways. First, many investigations of FFPR have looked at Chinese learners either in English as a second language (ESL) settings or at 4-year universities. Few have considered Chinese learners at 2-year colleges in EFL contexts. Second, there has been very little documentation of CMPR using annotation features in common word processing software in either ESL or EFL settings (Honeycutt, 2001). This study investigates the attitudes of 2-year college students in Taiwan toward the use of FFPR and CMPR in composition classes. Pedagogical implications are also drawn.

KEYWORDS
Face-to-face Peer Review, Computer-mediated Peer Review, Second Language Writing, EFL Learners.

INTRODUCTION
      Writing instruction in English as a second language (ESL) has seen considerable change following the influence of the process approach in the 1980s (Leki, 1992; Raimes, 1991; Reid, 1993; Zamel, 1987). This approach emphasizes writing as a process in which prewriting, multiple drafting, and revising are considered important in helping learners develop their skills. During multiple drafting, peer review is often used to afford learners experience in expression, interpretation, and negotiation of meaning. Such engagement in authentic communicative events offers an optimal opportunity for language learning (Savignon, 1983, 1997). Teachers typically ask learners to bring drafts of their writing to class where they then work in groups of two to four to read and comment on one another's writing. This exchange of feedback helps writers to clarify and give form to their meaning in subsequent drafts.

       There are several variations of peer review (Grabe & Kaplan, 1996; Zhu, 1994). Learners can read one another's papers silently or aloud. Partners can be assigned by the teacher or chosen by learners themselves. In some settings, teachers provide a peer review worksheet with guidelines as to what to look for while reviewing another's text (e.g., content, organization, and coherence). Learners are encouraged to comment not only on the strengths of the text but on its weaknesses as well. The practice of peer review is seen to offer advantages for learners in a variety of ways. Peer response groups may raise learners' audience awareness, foster collaboration, help learners develop a sense of discourse community, offer ideas and strategies for revision, and, most important, "expose learners to a variety of writing styles" (Grabe & Kaplan, 1996, p. 386; see also Nelson & Murphy, 1993; Spear, 1987).

     Peer review has become a common activity for learners of different writing proficiency levels in many first language (L1) and ESL contexts (Grabe & Kaplan, 1996; Nelson & Murphy, 1993; Villamil & Guerrero, 1996). However, very little is known about the use of process-focused peer review activities in EFL contexts. This is especially true for Asian contexts in which teacher-centered classrooms are the norm. In Taiwan, for example, along with relatively large class sizes, teacher-centered grammar-based instruction remains widespread (Wang, 2000). If appropriate and effective classroom practice is to be implemented, further exploration is needed of learners' attitudes toward learner-centered and communication-based activities such as peer review.

     The goal of peer review is to foster an atmosphere of reciprocal teaching between learners. The theoretical basis for the use of peer review in the development of writing skills, both in L1 and second language (L2) development, can be traced to (a) the notion of reciprocal teaching/scaffolding (Donato, 1994; Nystrand, 1986; Spear, 1987) and (b) the communicative approach to language teaching (CLT) (Elbow, 1981; Savignon, 1983, 1997, 2002). Second language writing pedagogy has felt the influence of both perspectives (Grabe & Kaplan, 1996; Reid, 1993). Communication, spoken and written alike, is the central focus of CLT and involves "a continuous process of expression, interpretation, and negotiation of meaning." (Savignon, 1997, p. 14; 2002, p. 1). The nature of peer review activities highlights this process. The basic insight of reciprocal teaching/scaffolding in the development of writing skills is that learners learn from one another by giving and receiving advice on the content, organization, and language use of their writing.
Computer-mediated peer review (CMPR) is a recent innovation in writing instruction. Along with the increasing availability of networked computers, computer-mediated communication (CMC) has gained importance in language teaching, especially in the teaching of composition. This study takes into consideration therefore both FFPR and CMPR.

LITERATURE REVIEW

Peer Review in Language Learning
       Numerous reports on the use of peer review in both L1 and ESL settings have explored aspects of peer review activities. These include learners' reactions and negotiation patterns, teachers' roles in peer review training, the effects of peer response on learners' writing, and learners' attitudes and affective benefits (Berg, 1999; Mangelsdorf, 1992; Mendonca & Johnson, 1994; Nelson & Murphy, 1993; Paulus, 1999; Villamil & Guerrero, 1996; Zhang, 1995). However, the findings are generally inconclusive. While some studies report the positive effects of peer review (Berg, 1999; Mendonca & Johnson, 1994), others show contrary findings (Carson & Nelson, 1996, 1998; Zhang, 1995).

         Mendonca and Johnson (1994) investigated peer negotiation in an ESL writing class at a major university in the northern United States. To examine the negotiation patterns of graduate student learners of English working in pairs, they analyzed audio-taped peer review sessions and learners' written drafts. In addition, posttask interviews were conducted to solicit learners' perceptions toward the usefulness of the peer review dyads. Five types of peer review negotiations were identified: asking questions, giving explanations, making restatements, offering suggestions, and correcting grammar. The analysis showed that during peer review learners focused on both local and global issues of their writing and that after negotiation they appeared to have a better understanding of its strengths and weaknesses. More important, learners developed audience awareness through peer review activities. The authors concluded that the learners in this study found peer review to be beneficial. In addition, peer review was found to "enhance students' communicative power by encouraging learners to express and negotiate their ideas" (1994, pp. 765-766).

       Berg (1999) examined the effect of peer responses from ESL learners who received peer review training on revision types and writing quality. The results showed that revised drafts from trained peer response groups contained more macrolevel changes such as changes in the content and meanings. Learners who had received training achieved higher scores on their second drafts than did those who did not. These findings suggest that peer review used with guidance can help ESL learners to improve their writing.

         Other studies have similarly shown peer review to positively influence ESL learners' writing (Mangelsdorf, 1992; Nelson & Murphy, 1992; Stanley, 1992). However, other studies have challenged those findings. Zhang (1995), for example, explored the "affective advantage" of peer feedback in ESL writing classes, advantage in terms of being more writer supportive and less text appropriating than using other means (Clifford, 1981; Elbow, 1973; Purves, 1984). To determine whether L2 learners felt such affective advantages, Zhang reexamined the use of peer review in ESL classrooms. The participants in this study were 81 ESL learners from one private college and one state university in the western United States. All learners were exposed to teacher-, peer-, and "self-directed" feedback types (1995, p. 214). ESL learners were found to "unequivocally" have a strong preference for teacher feedback as opposed to peer feedback, with learner-centered self-feedback the least popular option. Zhang concluded that the use of peer review in ESL classrooms should be carefully examined by teachers since the affective advantage of peer feedback that has been found in L1 settings does not necessarily apply to ESL learners. Zhang also advised teachers to take learners' cultural backgrounds into consideration when adopting the use of peer response groups in class.

         Several reasons have been suggested for ESL learners' seemingly unfavorable attitudes toward peer review and the failure of peer feedback in L2 settings to guide learners toward effective revision. First, since learners have to give comments on their peer's writing during peer review, some students might not feel comfortable doing so face-to-face (Spear, 1987). Second, since they are still developing their own writing proficiency, ESL learners may not trust their peers' response (Paulus, 1999). This might explain why some studies have found that ESL learners prefer teacher feedback to peer response. It may also be the case that peer review is experienced as a threat to the learners' concept of positive face or their positive self-esteem (Brown & Levinson, 1987; Scollon & Scollon, 2000), and that they therefore may tend to avoid it.

       Eighty-six percent of the participants in the Zhang (1995) study described above were from Asian backgrounds. The suggestion has been made therefore that the findings may have particular significance for teachers of Asian ESL or EFL learners. Because of what is sometimes claimed to be a relatively higher value placed on group over individual achievement in Asian culture, speculation has been made that Asian learners may feel especially uncomfortable commenting on one another's writing They would therefore potentially have unfavorable attitudes toward peer review. Accordingly, Carson and Nelson (1996) proposed that learners from what they term "collectivist" cultures, including Taiwan and the People's Republic of China (PRC) "are more concerned with effects of their actions to others" (p. 1); learners from Western countries, on the other hand, are seen to value individualism and "function more often for the benefit of the individual writer than for the benefit of the group" (p. 2).

        It may well be the case that individualism is advantageous when learners doing peer review are expected to state their own ideas and opinions. If so, to the extent that a group of learners may be said to share identifiable attributes,their different cultural backgrounds may need to be taken into account in judging reactions to peer review activities and feedback. In a subsequent study, Carson and Nelson (1998) looked specifically at cross-cultural issues in peer group interaction. Participants included three speakers of Chinese and eight speakers of Spanish from an advanced ESL writing class at a large US urban university. They found that both Spanish and Chinese learners valued the teacher's comments over those of their peers and preferred feedback "that identified problems in their drafts" (p.113). However, learners from different cultural backgrounds were seen to have very different types of interactions as well as views on peer review activities. During peer review sessions, Chinese ESL learners "frequently refrained from speaking because of their reluctance to criticize their peers, disagree with their peers, and claim authority as readers" (p. 127). While the Spanish learners' interactions were "task oriented," the Chinese focused on "maintain[ing] group harmony" (p.127). In other words, Carson and Nelson found the Spanish learners to be more active in pointing out the problems in their peers' writing for revision. The Chinese learners on the other hand tended not to criticize others' work and not to disagree with them. Accordingly, they concluded that peer response groups in a classroom in which the majority of learners are from what they considered to be "collectivist" cultures may not be as effective as those in a setting where learners are from cultures that value individualism.

Computer-assisted Language Learning

        The trend toward computer-assisted language learning (CALL) and computer-mediated communication (CMC) in language learning have influenced the teaching of writing in both L1 and L2 settings. More and more writing teachers have started conducting classes in networked computer labs or incorporating writing activities that engage learners with the use of computers (Warschauer, 1996). Computer-mediated peer review (CMPR), for instance, is one of the activities used to enhance learners' L2 writing. With networked computers, learners can do peer reviews online anywhere at anytime. Learners exchange drafts and feedback via email and communicate with one another through the use of interactive software programs. Not only can CMPR offer flexibility for both teachers and learners, it may also reduce psychological pressure on learners who do not like to give feedback in face-to-face situations. Depending on the kind of software used, CMPR could be used synchronously during regular class time or asynchronously at the convenience of the learners (see DiGiovanni & Nagaswami, 2001; Savignon & Roithmeier, 2004).

         To date, several studies have been conducted to examine CMPR in L1 and ESL writing classes in which researchers assert the advantages of CMPR. (Brown, Nielson, & Sullivan, 1998; Dean, 2001; DiGiovanni & Nagaswami, 2001; Skinner & Austin, 1999). Among them is an increase in learner motivation due to the new medium of expression. Colomb and Simutis (1996), Kelm (1992), Kern (1995), and Warschauer (1996) have all reported that the use of computers increases learners' motivation in second or foreign language writing.

         Skinner and Austin (1999) conducted research on synchronous computer-mediated peer conferencing. Computer conferencing, designed as a prewriting activity, involved 22 reportedly East Asian ESL learners using synchronous chat to communicate in groups on assigned topics. They found that by using online conferencing, learners formed a virtual community for communication. This not only offered a new means of communication but also helped learners reduce their anxiety in speaking and writing in a second language. Kern (1995) similarly reported the motivational benefits of computer use in foreign language learning, including increased learner expression, reduced "anxiety related to oral communication," and creation of "a collaborative spirit among learners" (p. 461). Of considerable significance, learners in this study who were often unwilling to participate in face-to-face discussion interacted more "actively" with peers during computer conferencing sessions (p. 470).

         Huang (1998) also suggested that FL writing teachers incorporate computer-mediated (CM) activities such as CMPR into their classrooms in order to create "variety in classroom activities" and to "provide a non-stress environment for learners who are shy or overly concerned about their oral language proficiency" (p.2). DiGiovanni and Nagaswami's (2001) research on synchronous CMPR in ESL writing classes at a community college in the US led to similar recommendations. They compared the face-to-face and online interactions of 52 ESL learners and analyzed those interactions by adapting the negotiation categories presented in Mendonca and Johnson (1994). For their online interactions, learners in this study used Norton Textra Connect,1 a software program for split screen electronic communication. A split screen protocol features character-by-character transmission rather than whole message transmission, allowing learners to view drafts 'letter by letter' as they are being produced in one window while simultaneously producing feedback to the writer in another window on the computer screen. DiGiovanni and Nagaswami found that more than half of the participants who used the split screen protocol felt that CMPR was more comfortable and interesting than FFPR and, important, felt that they did better reviewing online.

         Although research shows CMPR may have positive effects on learner motivation, it is worth noting that CMC is very different from face-to-face communication and could generate different types of interactions which might affect the effectiveness and quality of feedback. As noted above, CMPR may be conducted synchronously (for example, chat, ICQ, MUDs, etc.) or asynchronously (email, listserv discussion list, etc.), depending on the software used. The medium used for communication could affect language and language use in terms of style, coherence, etiquette, message length, and other features (Herring, 2002a).

RESEARCH QUESTIONS
         This study examines the use of face-to-face and asynchronous computer-mediated peer review in academic writing classes at a university of science and technology (UST) in Taiwan offering 2-year associate degree programs in intensive language study.2 In recent years, the number of learners enrolled in this new type of school has increased dramatically. The goal of the study reported here was to investigate the perceptions and attitudes of learners in this particular setting toward FFPR and CMPR and to determine whether CMPR as used in this study might be a good supplement to FFPR in writing classes. The specific research questions are the following:
1. How do learners in a UST react to face-to-face and computer-mediated peer review?
1.1 Do learners in a UST feel they benefit from doing face-to-face peer review?
1.2 Do learners in a UST have generally favorable attitudes toward computer-mediated peer review?
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2. What are the learners' perceptions concerning the annotation features of CMPR used in this study?

METHOD

Setting and Participants
         The participants were 37 English majors, 12 males and 25 females, at a national university of science and technology in Taiwan who comprised two intact classes in academic writing taught by two different teachers in the spring 2002. Learners who enroll in this kind of program have heterogeneous English learning backgrounds, but, to be admitted to the program, all must pass a nationally standardized entrance exam which evaluates their English proficiency. Therefore, although learners' English learning backgrounds may differ, the learners in this study had attained a similar level of language study. While most traditional English departments at universities in Taiwan focus on English literature, the English department in this particular setting emphasizes the teaching of English for practical use. The primary objective of the program is to prepare learners for working in an environment in which English is the primary means of communication. There are three major tracks in the program: business and technical English, English interpretation and translation, and English language teaching. Advanced Writing I, II, III, and IV are required courses for students in all three tracks. Each level requires one semester to complete and has different themes in different tracks. The department incorporated peer review activities as one of the assignments for all levels of the writing courses.

        Of the total of 37 participants, 18 were from a senior writing class (IV) taught by an English native speaker, and 19 were from a junior writing class (II) taught by a nonnative speaker of English with a Master's degree in TESOL from an American university. Although the focus of instruction for the two classes differed somewhat, both teachers used peer review to enhance learners' writing skills. In the senior writing class, students learned academic writing skills, including paraphrasing, quoting, and synthesizing outside sources. The students were required to complete two research papers during the semester. The teacher in the junior class structured the class based on instruction in different writing modes or genres (e.g., comparison and contrast, definition, classification, and argumentation). The students in this class were required to write short essays on assigned or self-selected topics.

Procedure

        The researchers first sought approval for doing this study from the chair of the English department at the UST. They then informed instructors of junior or senior academic writing classes via email of the purpose of this research. Two instructors in the department were willing to help by seeking volunteers in their classes. Neither instructor had ever used computer-mediated peer review in their instruction and were interested in trying it for a semester. During regular class hours, the teachers told the EFL learners of the purpose of the study, requesting voluntary participation. All of the learners in both classes agreed to participate and were assured that their expression of personal preferences for any type of peer review mode in the survey would in no way affect their grades.

Face-to-face peer review

         Since both instructors had had learners do face-to-face peer review (FFPR) before the time this study was conducted, the researchers interviewed both instructors via email to better understand the overall context and how FFPR sessions had been conducted. In both classes, learners were required to write three drafts for each writing assignment. Most often, teachers asked learners to bring in their first draft and paired learners for the exchange and review of each other's drafts. In reviewing the first two drafts, learners were asked to focus on global features of their peer's text (e.g., content, organization, and coherence). Afterwards, the learners themselves checked the local features of their own text before submitting a final draft. In the junior class, learners selected their own partner. However, the teacher encouraged learners to work with a different person for each peer review session during the semester. Learners in the senior class, on the other hand, were assigned to a partner. According to the instructor, learners' ability level was the most important criterion for selecting a partner for each learner. As Instructor two (T2)3said, I pair them by ability level. Sometimes good with good, poor with poor, but usually good with poor, or good with mediocre ability. Rarely good with good, because there aren't enough good ability students to go around, but then again it isn't fair to always put someone who has good writing ability with someone who isn't as good. It's hard. I will also consider their personalities and their gender to some degree-making sure they can get along and the males won't dominate the females-but their ability level is always the first consideration.

       Even though both classes had experience with peer review dyads in which learners focused on the global issues of writing, the procedures for conducting peer review sessions were somewhat different. In the senior writing class, due to time constraints and the length of written assignments, most peer review sessions were conducted by learners outside of class. The learners reviewed an assigned peer's draft by following the instructions on the peer review worksheet provided by the teacher. In addition to pointing out the strengths and the weaknesses of their peer's writing, learners were required to give suggestions for revision. To track the activity and to facilitate learners' future revision, the instructor also required learners to provide written feedback, which was typically reviewed by the instructor before being given to the peer. In the junior writing class, since most written assignments were no more than two to three pages long, learners conducted all peer review sessions in class. The teacher also provided peer review guidelines (worksheets) and expected learners to give written feedback.

       Initial email correspondence with the instructors suggested that they had similar concepts of face-to-face peer review activity. The following excerpts from the email exchanges between the researchers and the two instructors are indicative of the teachers' rationale: peer review helps learners to realize some common errors which might happen to their classmates and to themselves as well. Also, by correcting others' papers, learners will have better ideas about essay organization … . Learners learn to trust their peers' correction, instead of relying heavily on teachers' feedback. (QUE01/T1)
I want them to internalize the peer review process so they can use it with their own papers when no peer is available … when it [peer review dyad] works out right because when a learner has the right peer feedback at the right time a breakthrough in improving his/her writing can occur. (T2)

Computer-mediated peer review

       Since none of the learners had had prior experience with computer-mediated peer review (CMPR), researchers cooperated with instructors to set up the activity. In the senior class, most regular class hours were used for one-on-one teacher-learner conferences in the instructor's office; learners did not typically work together in class. Therefore, the instructor suggested having learners do CMPR outside of the class as an assignment. Since CMPR in this study involved only email and simple annotation features in common word-processing programs, learners could easily complete their tasks asynchronously at home or in the computer lab at school. To guide them initially, the instructor asked learners to email their drafts as an attachment and provide their feedback directly on their peer's computer draft using "Track Changes" in Word as shown in the examples below. Learners then emailed the draft with feedback to the peer. In the junior-level class, the teacher agreed to adopt CMPR during regular class sessions, scheduling them in a networked computer lab. The procedures of CMPR were the same as those used in the senior class. Both classes adopted CMPR during the second half of the semester. During CMPR, the learners read the drafts and typed the feedback on the computer. There was no exchange of printouts or paper-based feedback.

        The major feature of "Track Changes" is to document every change made in a text, including questions, comments, insertions, and deletions. By using "Track Changes," learners were able to insert feedback adjacent to a problematic sentence or paragraph. These changes automatically appeared in a different font color along with a text box. As can be seen in the following examples, feedback can be interwoven in the texts or shown in text boxes in the margin. (Colored font has been replaced here with italics). Depending on the version of Word, the feedback may appear in a different place. For example, in Word XP, the comments and deleted words are highlighted in a small textbox in the margin.

Example 1
In 2001, according to the estimate of the economic prosperity center of National Statistics Bureau, the average income of each rural farmer in 2000 is two thousand four hundred and thirty four renminbi. In addition, provinces like Qui-Zhou, Xi-Cang, Gan-Su, Quing-Hai, Yun-Nan, Some readers might not know where the places are, please add more information to make it clearer to your readers. the average income is lower; especially in Qui-Zhou province, the average farmer's earning is only one thousand one hundred and thirty six renminbi.

Example 2
(It would be better to start with your T.S. , and also reveal your main idea first, so reader can probably know what you gonna talk about in your paper, and continue to read it) Many elementary schools' English teachers in Taiwan face a serious problem: students do not like to read. A survey (investigating Taiwan's children's reading interests) conducted by Lin shows children's favorite extracurricular activities are: watching TV (73.4%), playing games / chatting (63.1%), reading informal readers (49.5%), and playing video games (49.3%).

Example 3
Teachers should take reading picture books as an interest, rather than a purpose of test, otherwise will eliminate students' reading motivation. Arousing children's desire of reading will prepare them to read more in their lifelong time. (could you explain more why teachers "should" take reading picture books as…) Seems like you don't have a strong conclusion. You can add one or two more sentences restated about "picture book"(which is your main idea) and the three characteristics to conclude the paragraph and this paper.
p.s. the information and examples in the paper are very good. I suggest you can add more examples and explain how the three characteristics work together when you extend this paper from 5 to 8 pages.

Example 4
Teachers can go through the cover page and the first page first without revealing the points and the outcome of the story. Then students will become very curious to find out what is happening next and start to read (2001). You can add one more sentence to conclude (summarize) this paragraph. Ex, "so the first characteristics of picture book, "picture", can…..The second characteristic that picture books functions to arouse children's interest is the 'pattern'. You can explain what "pattern" means here first. To give an easy and clear explanation will make readers understand what you say in this paragraph. Picture books are patterned with repeated phrases, rhythms, and refrains that can appeal students to start reading.

Example 5
In this character of this story, Guloong is a painstaking, intelligent, responsible and paying deep love for his lover and family. Therefore, there is a special holiday is called "Qixi" (0x01 graphic)to commemorate their love. Does Qixi relate to this topic? According to these three descriptions, "Cowboy" could be commented with different meanings because different countries, culture or nations.

Suggestion:

1. There's no exact relation between the English word "Cowboy" and the Chinese expression 0x01 graphic. 2. Therefore, I suggest that you focus only on the Chinese one. 3. Try to give definition for its original meaning, then relate to its current usage.

Data Collection and Analysis

        To investigate the EFL learners' perceptions of both FFPR and CMPR, a questionnaire was developed that included three parts: a biographical section, 30 items using a 5-point Likert scale (5 indicating strongly agree and 1 strongly disagree), and 5 open-ended questions. The biographical section asked for learners' previous major and English learning experience. The 30 Likert-scale items were designed to measure learners' attitudes toward both peer review modes as well as specific features of CMPR, including "Track Changes," and "reading drafts and offering feedback on the computer."

      The two EFL instructors distributed the questionnaires to the participants together with an informed consent form. All 37 participants remained anonymous. Since both instructors allowed learners to fill out the questionnaire during the regular class hours or teacher-student writing conferences, there was a 100% return rate. However, four questionnaires had incomplete responses and were excluded from data analysis.
The 30 Likert-scale items were tested for reliability coefficients (Cronbach's alpha). Responses to the 30 items were then coded and imported into SPSS for descriptive statistics analysis. For the purpose of analysis, responses to items that were phrased negatively were transposed. To determine whether learners' answers to an item significantly differed from the mid-point of the scale (3), all responses were submitted a one-sample t test with the hypothetical mean score of 3 and a confidence interval of 95%.

       In addition to the Likert-scale items, five open-ended questions were developed. The purpose of these questions was to elicit reasons for an expressed preference for a certain peer review mode that may not have been captured by the Likert-scale items as well as to identify the benefits and problems learners experienced. Learners' responses to each open-ended question were read, major topics identified, and similar topics or opinions grouped together to form categories. The first four open-ended questions were designed to elicit detailed information about the problems and benefits learners experienced during both FFPR and CMPR. In the final question, three ways of doing peer review (i.e., FFPR, CMPR, and a combination of the two) were juxtaposed. In their responses, learners were directed to indicate their preference and give reasons for it. The rationale for including the option of a combination of the two peer review modes was to better understand learners' perceptions of how peer review activities should be conducted. In this study, CMPR was based mostly on written communication; few verbal exchanges were involved. Ong (1977) convincingly argued that a person's visual and vocal senses complement each other to foster superior intellectual development. To promote such an advantage, Schultz (2000) suggested that "the verbal characteristics" of FFPR such as oral discussion and "the visual characteristics" of CMPR such as typed comments be used in combination to benefit foreign language learners the most (p. 141). Given that the learners in this study had already experienced both FFPR and CMPR, the option of "the combination of the two modes" was included. In the discussion that follows, learners' responses to the open-ended questions are organized according to the advantages and disadvantages of both FFPR and CMPR.

RESULTS

       The reliability coefficients for the 30 Likert-scale items are presented in Table 1. According to Sax (1989), a reliability coefficient of more than .6 is required for a self-designed text or survey. The CMPR and features (including Track Changes, font color, and spelling and grammar checks) of CMPR scales achieved alphas of .69 and .71, respectively. The alpha for the FFPR scale was a less than satisfactory .50. The FFPR was the scale with the fewest number of items. The coefficient could perhaps have been improved if the number of items in this scale had been increased (Henning, 1987).

Learners' Perceptions of Peer Review

       The descriptive statistics in Table 2 show learners had favorable attitudes toward face-to-face peer review (M = 3.95,SD = 0.41, t = 13.29, p < 0.01). Items 1, 9, and 25 had a mean score higher than 4, indicating a high agreement among learners. More than 82% of learners agreed that peer review helped them improve their writing and should be used in writing classes. In addition, as many as 92% of the learners agreed that they benefited from reviewing their peer's writing. This last finding may reflect what Grabe and Kaplan (1996), Reid (1993), and Spear (1987) have argued, namely, that peer review can boost learners' confidence as a second language writer because they can see other learners also make mistakes and struggle with the writing.

       As Table 3 shows, when asked if they liked to do computer-mediated peer review, learners did not express very strong agreement (M = 3.52, SD = 0.41, t = 7.25, p < 0.01). The mean score (3.12) of item 24 was not significant. Although as many as 67% of the learners liked to use "Track Changes" when providing feedback on the document (Item 26: M =3.81, SD = 0.76), only 46% said they wanted to continue doing CMPR in the writing class. The same percentage of learners (46%) chose not to agree or disagree (Item 11: M = 3.33, SD = 0.77). Overall, learners had less favorable attitudes toward CMPR than toward FFPR.

Learners' Reaction to Features of CMPR

       The features of CMPR examined in this study include: exchanging drafts via email, Track Changes, font colors, spelling and grammar checks, the nature of typed feedback on the drafts, and reading drafts on the computer. Thirteen items were designed to investigate what features learners found helpful when doing CMPR and what features they found difficult to use. Table 4 shows most learners felt that "Track Changes" was very convenient for giving feedback (Item 17: M = 3.94,SD = .65, t = 8.19, p <.01) and that exchanging drafts via email was efficient (Item 29: M = 4, SD = .93, t = 6.14, p < .01). In addition, learners generally think the spelling and grammar checks are useful, and typing feedback right after/next to problematic sentences and paragraphs is helpful and easy to read. However, when asked if reading drafts on the computer is difficult, most learners chose to remain neutral (Item 8: M = 3.15, SD = 1.09, t = -0.79, not significant)

Responses to Open-ended Questions
Face-to-face peer review

       The major advantage learners associated with FFPR was that they were able to talk with peers during the review session, which enabled them to seek clarification and negotiate meanings to avoid misunderstanding. Most learners found that this not only eased the peer review process but that it also made the peer review more effective because many found speaking more efficient than writing. One learner wrote, "I can discuss my problems with my peers in detail. Through this face-to-face process, I always get useful suggestions from my peer." In addition, some learners mentioned that when encountering complicated ideas or disagreement, they liked to discuss in their native language. A senior learner wrote, "My partners and I can directly point out each other's weak points in our writings. Oral feedback is more efficient to me than written feedback. When I felt it's difficult to talk in English. We preferred to speak Chinese … ."
  
        Learners also reported several problems in these sessions. They often did not have enough time to read and comment on each other's writing. They typically rushed through a review without fully explaining the problems they found or the questions they had. Some also found it difficult to come up with specific suggestions in a limited time. One learner wrote, "I could not immediately provide a suggestion to the problem of my partner's paper … if time is limited, could not explain all the problems I found in the limited time." In addition, many learners felt uncomfortable pointing out their peer's problems face to face. Some indicated that they would avoid identifying problems in other's writing and try to encourage their peers in order to maintain a harmonious relationship. Sometimes, instead of specifically pointing out problems, they would suggest adding more details: "while I do face-to-face peer review, I wouldn't really criticize my peer's writing. I would rather encourage him/her to get more detailed information. This attitude would sometimes harm the writing progress of my peer. In short, the Chinese people's attitude-harmony might hinder writers from progress."

Computer-mediated peer review

       Learners reported two major advantages of CMPR. First, CMPR offered more flexibility than FFPR. Many indicated that since they and their partner did not need to be logged on to the computer at the same time, they could read and comment when convenient and at their own pace. Learners were able to take time to reflect on their ideas and rehearse responses to their partner. The use of "Track Changes" also made the reviewing process easier. Learners could edit and revise their feedback easily, and most learners found typing more convenient than handwriting. One learner wrote: "I think the benefits are as follows: it's easy to change any points I think not appropriate. It's easy to add whatever I want to express. It's clear to see my point to my peer's paper." It seems that being able to edit feedback on the computer was a real benefit for learners since typed feedback could be changed anytime before being forwarded to the author.

       In addition, most learners reported that they felt more comfortable and less pressure giving feedback on the computer. In CMPR, they did not have to face their peers, and, consequently, many seemed to worry less about their peers' reactions. One learner wrote, "We can say what we want and express our thoughts directly." Another stated, "while giving feedback [on the computer], I feel free to say anything I wanted to say without worrying about my peer's reaction."

       CMPR is not without disadvantages. As explained above, the opportunity for oral discussion was considered a major benefit of FFPR. Accordingly, the lack of verbal communication in CMPR was seen to be one of its drawbacks. One learner stated, "Some problems you face [during peer review] may be very complicated and you cannot explain very clearly [without talking to your peers]." Other problems cited relate to the use of email. A number of learners complained about the uncertainty of email transactions. A leaner from the senior class wrote, "my peer once mistyped my email address, and of course, I did not get my feedback;" another commented, "The mail might be lost while sending it to my partner, and it could be due to mail to the wrong address … ."

       The time delay in email also presented a problem for some. Some learners reported that their peers took advantage of this and failed to provide timely feedback: "my partners have excuses to give my feedback late" and "I waited a long time for the feedback but no one sent anything to me." In addition, some learners found reading drafts on the computer uncomfortable: "difficult to read drafts on the screen. Feel my eyes with fatigue," and "it was too hard to read things from the computer screen directly. My eyes would be extremely sore … ."
In response to the final open-ended question, 24 out of the total 33 (72%) said they preferred a combination of face-to-face and computer-mediated peer review. They felt that the two review modes could be used to complement each other. Of those learners who favored a combination of both peer review modes, many suggested that CMPR should be followed by face-to-face discussion. By so doing, they would be able to comment on each other's drafts on the computer at their own convenience and also have a chance to negotiate meanings and ask questions about the feedback they received. One junior learner wrote, "I prefer a combination of the two because I can read the feedback from CMPR first and then ask my peer about some questions in my paper face-to-face." Another stated, "A combination would be great. Doing online peer review first, then discuss [with peers] face-to-face. While doing FFPR, we could talk in our native tongue. This would make the whole communication process easier and clearer."

DISCUSSION

       Responses to the Likert-scale items suggested that although learners accepted both peer review modes, they had more favorable attitudes toward FFPR than CMPR. There was strong agreement with statements such as "Face-to-face peer review (FFPR) helps me improve my writing," "I benefit from reviewing the writing of my classmates," and "I think peer review should be used in writing classes;" whereas statements on CMPR such as "I like to do CMPR" and "I want to continue doing CMPR in writing classes" showed only moderate agreement. Responses to open-ended questions suggested some of the reasons for learners' preference for one mode over the other. Being able to discuss with peers was the most generally acknowledged benefit of FFPR. In contrast, lack of oral discussion was the most common drawback mentioned for CMPR. Although the learners found CMPR to offer several advantages such as flexibility in scheduling for review and a new means for editing feedback in the document, learners still considered oral discussion during peer review sessions to be critical. Given that peer review is a highly interactive activity in which learners constantly interpret and negotiate the meanings of one another's writing, speaking appears a more efficient mode and one that in many instances can prevent misunderstanding. In FFPR, learners not only provided written feedback, but they also had chances to clarify ideas and exchange opinions with peers. On the other hand, in CMPR, learners had to rely only on feedback on the document itself, something they considered a serious drawback.

       These findings should not be interpreted to mean that CMPR is not useful and should not be used in writing classes. Many special features such as "Track Changes" and "spelling and grammar checks" were found to be helpful and convenient. Moreover, many learners indicated that they preferred typing instead of writing while providing feedback. This finding is contrary to that of Huang (1998) who found typing skill to be an obstacle in CMPR for Chinese learners. These learners at a university of science and technology even found typing to be more efficient and convenient than handwriting.

       Although learners' attitudes were more favorable toward FFPR than toward CMPR, many found it somewhat stressful to review others' work face to face. They were afraid that in pointing out their peer's problems they might hurt the other's feelings or even damage their friendship. Some said that they would not critique and identify problems directly in order to maintain a friendly relationship. These findings corroborate those of Carson and Nelson (1996, 1998) that Chinese learners often avoid discussing problems and disagreeing with peers in order to maintain harmony. However, more research is needed to know whether this is a uniquely Chinese trait or whether learners from Western cultures behave in the same way. The second author of this research report has gathered substantial anecdotal evidence of peer pressure to maintain harmony and consensus among 18- to 20-year-old university students in the US, whether in full class, small group, or one-on-one discussion of each other's writing. In addition, it should be noted that proper training is important before having learners do peer review. Teachers should explain the purpose of peer review and let learners know that their responsibility is to offer honest feedback in an effort to help their peers. In this way, learners may feel less pressure while pointing out problems in their peers' writing.

       The fact that most learners in this study found FFPR helpful suggests that a concern for harmony did not prevent the activity from being productive. Most learners had positive attitudes toward peer review in general and acknowledged its value in helping them to revise subsequent drafts. Many suggested that they would like to do CMPR first and then have face-to-face discussion with a peer. By doing so, they could read and comment on each other's draft at their own pace and also have a chance to ask questions and clarify ideas. They saw a combination of the two modes as a way to make peer review activities more efficient and effective.
Several pedagogical implications can be drawn for EFL writing instructors in Taiwan, especially for those teaching at universities of science and technology. CMPR should not be used alone in the writing class due to its main limitation: lack of oral communication. Since peer review is a highly interactive activity, oral discussion is more efficient than written communication. Its advantage is clear even if such discussion should take place in the learners' L1. However, in light of comments from the learners as to their preference for speaking Chinese in class—a finding that appears to reflect a more general tendency of Taiwanese learners to favor the use of Chinese in English classes (Wang, 2002)—classroom research is needed to understand the reasons for and the extent of Chinese language use and to identify ways in which more advanced-level learners, in particular, can be encouraged to speak English. Teachers might consider combining both FFPR and CMPR to make peer review sessions more productive. For example, since time constraints are an issue common to many classes, teachers could have learners do CMPR outside of classroom and then allow time for face-to-face sessions during regular class hours.

       This study is not without limitations. First, all the participants were from the same national university of science and technology. The small sample size does not allow generalizations to EFL learners in universities throughout Taiwan. Research with a larger sample drawn from different universities is needed to confirm our findings. Second, learners' responses elicited from a questionnaire with Likert-type items and open-ended questions may or may not be as accurate or complete as those gathered by means of in-depth face-to-face interviews. Third, since the participants were recruited from two classes taught by different teachers, there is a possibility that learners' perceptions of both FFPR and CMPR were influenced by the instructional objectives and styles of their teacher.
Future research on peer review in EFL settings could well examine how learners' perceptions toward both face-to-face and computer-mediated peer review are affected by such variables as teaching style, assignment types, learners' age, and English learning experience. In order to reap the benefits of a process approach to writing, can they learn to focus on the global features of a text, things like content, organization, and coherence, as well as on the more familiar sentence-level grammatical structure? In addition, since the findings of the present study suggest that both FFPR and CMPR are best used together, future research could investigate the advantages of various combinations of the two modes. Given the communicative nature of peer review, by documenting learner interactions in both face-to-face and computer-mediated sessions, future research could also explore how students negotiate meaning.

The present study yields encouraging results. It shows peer review to be a highly communicative language activity that can be used successfully in an EFL context in Taiwan. The learners in this study not only had favorable attitudes toward the experience, they found peer review helped them with their writing. These findings do not support the suggestion that peer review may not work well for learners with a Chinese cultural background (Carson & Nelson 1996; 1998). Moreover, research findings related to learners in ESL contexts might not be an accurate representation of peer review in EFL contexts. Although the learners in this study reported experiencing pressure in pointing out problems in one another's writing, the advantages offered by peer review activity in general seemed to outweigh the drawbacks. Peer review appears to be a means of increasing learner communication in writing classes, offering ideas and strategies for revision, and promoting a sense of discourse community (Grabe & Kaplan, 1996; Nelson & Murphy, 1992; Spear, 1987). Most important, peer review may reduce learners' apprehension of writing in a foreign language and increase their confidence as EFL writers.

NOTES
1 The Norton Textra Connect software supports file sharing, discussion, editing of word-processed documents inside learners' word processor. It has both real-time and asynchronous discussion features, private messaging, and group talk.
2 These 2-year programs follow a 5-year junior college program (a combination of high school and the first 2 years of college). A detailed description of these 2-year programs and of their English language goals is provided in the discussion of the research design that follows. The appendix to this article outlines the formal education system in Taiwan.
3 Email exchanges between the researchers and the teachers are identified by teacher.

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Rabu, 28 September 2011

Being a teacher trainee (1)


PPLK sudah dimulai sejak 5 September lalu. Sejak hari pertama itu sudah banyak saja yang ingin kutuliskan di sini, tapi sayang, waktu tak mau diajak kompromi. PPLK benar-benar menguras waktu dan energiku. Eitss... tapi jangan salah, its fun and I really enjoy it, meski sometimes ada beberapa hal yang sedikit tak sesuai dengan keinginan dan pemikiranku. Its okay, so far so good lah...haha...
Huft... sudah lama nggak menulis, malas banget. Akibatnya, tulisanku jadi nggak bermutu gini. Ups... Emang dulu pernah bermutu? hahaha. At least, dulu se-universitas orang baca karyaku.
Kita tulis saja kesan hari ini.
Hmm... every day is a new day. Hari ini, Rabu (28/9), berangkat lumayan pagi, 6.40 am. (Menurutku saja kepagian, menurut yang lain ini termasuk telat, ah... emang gw pikirin, live in your own life! haha-otak mafia-). Seharusnya memang berangkat lebih pagi daripada 6.40 am, coz perjalanan ke sekolah -SMP N 1 Batang Anai- dari Padang membutuhkan waktu 30 menit, benar-benar nggak bisa ditawar lagi. Berapapun kecepatanku, tetap saja sampainya sekitaran 30 menit coz jalanan rame bangetz. Apalagi, kemaren sudah diingatkan Kepala Sekolah bahwasanya guru PPLK harus keliling sekolah pukul 7.20 untuk cek and ricek whether siswa udah piket kelas atau belum. Jadilah hari ini teman-teman PL kembali keliling sekolah lagi. Aku? hehe, hari ini aku piket, jadi aku stay aja di meja piket. fhufhufhu...
Yup, hari ini jadwal piketku. Kupilih hari ini coz hari ini ngajar di jam ke 5-8. So, 1-4 hingga istirahat aku kosong. Memang, ada hari Senin yang benar-benar kosong, aku sebagai guru bahasa Inggris nggak punya jadwal sama sekali, tapi dulu aku berencana mengambil Senin sebagai day off. Ternyata dan ternyata, Kelapa Sekolah menginginkan semua guru PL hadir hari Senin untuk ikut upacara bendera. Terus bagaimana dengan piket di jam 5-8? Hm... aku piket bareng Santi, temanku dari Seni Rupa yang sekarang sedang hamil 6 bulan. Semoga kandungan Santi sehat, amien... (nggak fokus banget ya, haha). Santi kosong selesai istirahat hingga jam ke 6. Nah, jam ke 6 siswa kelas 7 dan 8 sudah pulang, jadi nggak penting lagi guru piket. Psstt... gara-gara teman-teman yang lain ngajar kelas 7 dan 8, kami yang ngajar kelas 9 jadi nggak punya teman lagi di jam-jam terakhir. Hmmfft...
Berhubung piket, aku harus tangani semuanya. Mulai dari siswa yang telat hingga yang mengeluh sakit. Nah, hari ini ada yang sakit kepala sampai menangis. Aku bawa ke UKS dan dikasih Procold (katanya kalau sakit biasa minum Procold). Setelah itu, aku ajak cerita sedikit. Wuih.... ternyata anaknya bijak banget. Ceritanya panjang dan sangat-sangat terbuka soal masalah dan keadaaan keluarganya. Hm...aku jadi geleng-geleng kepala.
Siska namanya. Siswa VII9. Katanya sudah tinggal kelas 3 kali di SD. Alhasil, teman-temannya sudah kelas 1 SMA. Nah, Anak-anak seperti ini tentu wajar jika ada rasa pesimis di hatinya, tapi ternyata ke-pesimis-annya itu bertambah parah karna komentar-komentar negatis dari orang-orang di sekitanya. Ah... kasihan... Andai aku bisa jadi mentor pribadinya soal konseling dan psikologinya. Hah, emang aku bisa? ckckckc...
Selepas istirahat, masuk kelas IX2. Harusnya hari ini kedua kelas, IX2 dan IX1 aku yang handle. Huft... seperti biasa, persiapanku belum matang, bahkan belum dirancang sama sekali, dasar! Nah, untungnya, lebih dari setengah siswa kelas IX pulang untuk jemput ijazah SD untuk data UN. Hebat ya. Masa nggak ada pengumuman untuk bawa ijazah kemaren, jadi baru sekarang dikasih tahu sehingga hampir semua siswa pulang ke rumah dan harus balik lagi. Rumahnya pun nggak semuanya dekat. Taufik saja yang kemaren cabut dan mengaku rumahnya dekat belum balik sampai jam ke 6, apalagi yang rumahnya sejauh rumah Siska yang sakit tadi, di Kali Air. Ah... ada-ada saja. Manajemennya ini, manajemen! Upsstt...
So, ngajar yang belum ada persiapan tadi nggak jadi. Di IX2, sangat-sangat sepi, jadi Afri menyanyi 'my bonnie' saja. Di IX1, lumayan rame dan siswa sudah dapat fotocopian teks descriptive yang ke-2 yang kubuat, jadi mereka kerjakan tugas di worksheet itu. Alhamdulillah ya...

Hmm...lama banget nulis segini aja. Ya sudahlah, segini aja. Sudah pukul 11.34 PM, persiapan untuk besok yang sudah pending 1 hari masih belum juga, Astagfirullahal'adzim...
Semoga esok jauh lebih baik daripada hari ini, Amien ya Rabb...